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Shells

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She kissed my cheeks
And said my scent was of the beach,
Holding me as I cried,
While the sea's salty water
Leaked from my eyes

And she held out her hand,
Catching them, so they didn't land
And tarnish the pale beauty
Of shells laying in the sand,
Breathing in the ocean of our souls.
I can't decide whether or not this is really terrible.
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Anti-nutella's avatar
I agree. It's not bad but not the best. There is potential though, so don't give up